1. First shot is a high angled shot from behind a girl of her running. She’s holding her heels in her hand and her dress seems scruffy and ripped
2. Cut to a close-up of her face (mascara running down etc.), looking left and right with heavy panting to show she’s scared
3. We cut to her legs running from the side as there’s a tracking shot
4. Cut back to the behind of her, this time a panning shot for a few seconds but she will be getting further away
5. Close-up shot of the girls face gasping and looking left
6. Here there’s a long shot (she’s still looking left) but she stops completely
7. She drops her shoes and we cut to a close up tracking shot of them falling to the floor (slow motion)
8. Point of view shot of the girl (as she’s just looked sideways)
9. The point of view shows the green bushes and they’re rustling – diegetic sounds of her crying and gasping heavier and heavier
10. Zoom into the bushes as it rustles more and more
11. Extreme close-up of her eyes as they shut
12. Cut to flashback of what she saw before
13. Black and white scene
14. Long shot of two people sat at the bar
15. Close-up on girls face, this time she has no make-up running down it etc.
16. Tracking shot of girl drinking
17. Extreme close up on drink as she puts it back on the counter
18. Cut back to longshot
19. Over the shoulder shot of the guy standing up
20. *Start montage of Jump cuts* Close up of guy ‘accidentally’ knocking the
girls bag off the counter
21. *Close up of the bag on the floor as the contents spill
22. *Cut to close-up of the guys hand taking something out his pocket
23. *Jump cuts of his hand going to put it in the drink of the girl
24. *Close up of the drink with the pill fizzing in it
25. *Close-up of girl drinking the drink
26. Cut back to the prior scene – non-diegetic uncomfortable/disturbing music
27. Extreme long shot of the car going over a hill or something
28. Extreme long shot of car, but different angle...can’t see the driver
29. Dark lighting, close-up of a hand on a car wheel
30. Long shot of the darkness but diegetic rustling sound of car going over grass
31. Point of view shot of killer, looking out the window…wobbly
32. Cut to close-up of radio in car
33. Close-up point of view gloved hand presses a button on the radio
34. Diegetic sound, really loud, contrapuntal music
35. Cut to exterior of car as it comes to a halt – diegetic music with it
36. Contrapuntal music continues, back shoulder shot of the killer stood at back of car
37. Close-up of black gloved hand on the boot opener handle
38. Sustained medium-shot of the boot opening
39. Still sustained shot, close up, we see a person with hands tied and tape over her lips (same girl as before) and we see a shovel
40. Close up of girls wriggling for help
41. Cut to close up on the shovel, see the same gloved hand but his hand on the
handle of the shovel
42. Ellipses edit to back shot again with the man slamming the boot shut
43. High angled, sustained medium tracking shot of the guy from behind dragging
the shovel
44. Cut to front of guy stopping – medium close-up but just on the bottom of his legs
45. Sustained long shot of him digging and digging. Wobbly to suggest insecurities
46. Cut to back long shot of him opening the boot
47. Close up of the girl wriggling again in the boot
48. Cut to ellipses edit of him carrying the girl from the front…can’t see his face
49. Jump cuts so film from ages away then cut closer and closer to create an eerie look
50. Close up of killer at screen, only see his eyes (wide eyed)
51. Immediately cut to opening titles (full screen of title)
52. Next scene- its day time, long shot of crime scene investigation tape and two
people stood observing one crime scene investigator on the floor. Overlay titles
53. Close up of the tape wobbling and rustling in the wind
54. Fade to black to suggest the end of our piece
-FIN-
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